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STFU by FionaCanajART STFU by FionaCanajART
Hide me somewhere!!!!Im shamed!!!!:iconotlplz:
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My first animation....it sucks and has a lot of mistakes
*goes and kills self=_______=
Sanii(c)me
103 frames
SAI&CS7
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BTW is impolite to shout on others face
Oh fuck you walk!!!Its too fast1!!
UPDATE
Remade the walk!its better :D
*thanks for the comments and supports i love you all!Please help me reach 500+ favs
UPDATE 2:
Got new advices,i think ill deal it now!
Moarrrr interesting stuff:

UPDATE3::star:HEY GUYS!Start reading my manga if interested:[link] :star:
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Well done, FionaCanaj

There is very little wrong with this, as you might have guessed with your Comment-box. This animation is cute, has humor, and the stylistic choice to be Anime'.

I can't congratulate you well enough on this. There is nothing i could find wrong with this except that My t-picky eyes honed in on the hair not moving when she did, (which you said you're working on anyways) and The Spectres face not holding its emotion. It looked like he was Surprised or confused, but then blank slate.

If i dint know any better, i'd say that you were trying to goose your rating by saying that this is your first animation!
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The first thing that caught my attention was its colors that are nice and warm, the shading isn't anything much, but you made it smooth, basic, and appealing to the whole situation. The animation is sloopy at some parts and sometimes too fast to the point of bothering my eyes. The part where the demon vanishes, however, was good and somewhat interesting.

Although the animation lacks a bit of dynamism, I have to take in consideration that this is your first animation, so overall the whole idea of this is creative enough and you made it work nicely. Congrats and keep it up :)
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Divine-Angel-Heroine Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student General Artist
While watching the animation: ..... Hahaha- *Coughs.*
After reading the description: You took the 1st step. You tried and kept growing.
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FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah thanks so much :hug:
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Divine-Angel-Heroine Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student General Artist
Always welcome. :icondragonhug:
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SGT-Stories Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why would anyone ever want to keep eating that lollipop after that...
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FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol they would if it was the last on earth :lol:
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SGT-Stories Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not even though. 
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ThePockyQueen Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very nice for your first!~
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FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thakies ^_^
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ThePockyQueen Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!~
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Nothing250 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student General Artist
It's not that bad. Just needs a bit or work is all.

Overall it's pretty good for your first full body anim. Good job
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