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Hide me somewhere!!!!Im shamed!!!!:iconotlplz:
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My first animation....it sucks and has a lot of mistakes
*goes and kills self=_______=
Sanii(c)me
103 frames
SAI&CS7
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BTW is impolite to shout on others face
Oh fuck you walk!!!Its too fast1!!
UPDATE
Remade the walk!its better :D
*thanks for the comments and supports i love you all!Please help me reach 500+ favs
UPDATE 2:
Got new advices,i think ill deal it now!
Moarrrr interesting stuff:

UPDATE3::star:HEY GUYS!Start reading my manga if interested:[link] :star:
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:iconslippymagnus:
Well done, FionaCanaj

There is very little wrong with this, as you might have guessed with your Comment-box. This animation is cute, has humor, and the stylistic choice to be Anime'.

I can't congratulate you well enough on this. There is nothing i could find wrong with this except that My t-picky eyes honed in on the hair not moving when she did, (which you said you're working on anyways) and The Spectres face not holding its emotion. It looked like he was Surprised or confused, but then blank slate.

If i dint know any better, i'd say that you were trying to goose your rating by saying that this is your first animation!
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
10 out of 11 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconlauramma:
The first thing that caught my attention was its colors that are nice and warm, the shading isn't anything much, but you made it smooth, basic, and appealing to the whole situation. The animation is sloopy at some parts and sometimes too fast to the point of bothering my eyes. The part where the demon vanishes, however, was good and somewhat interesting.

Although the animation lacks a bit of dynamism, I have to take in consideration that this is your first animation, so overall the whole idea of this is creative enough and you made it work nicely. Congrats and keep it up :)
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
17 out of 19 deviants thought this was fair.

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Divine-Angel-Heroine Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student General Artist
While watching the animation: ..... Hahaha- *Coughs.*
After reading the description: You took the 1st step. You tried and kept growing.
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah thanks so much :hug:
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:icondivine-angel-heroine:
Divine-Angel-Heroine Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student General Artist
Always welcome. :icondragonhug:
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:iconsgt-stories:
SGT-Stories Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why would anyone ever want to keep eating that lollipop after that...
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol they would if it was the last on earth :lol:
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:iconsgt-stories:
SGT-Stories Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not even though. 
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:iconthepockyqueen:
ThePockyQueen Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very nice for your first!~
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thakies ^_^
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:iconthepockyqueen:
ThePockyQueen Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!~
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:iconnothing250:
Nothing250 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student General Artist
It's not that bad. Just needs a bit or work is all.

Overall it's pretty good for your first full body anim. Good job
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^_^
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:iconnothing250:
Nothing250 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student General Artist
Np, if you ever need advice on animation, let me know and I'll help anyway I can
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:iconcrazyolddude:
CrazyOldDude Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Its is amazing espacialy her lips.
Oh and the demon's vanishing part was amazing too!
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks dear I'm glad you think so ^_^
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:iconcrazyolddude:
CrazyOldDude Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:) Welcome
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:iconjohnstrauss:
JohnStrauss Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
This happened to me once. I didn't have a lollipop so it didn't turn out nearly as well.
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:iconjohnstrauss:
JohnStrauss Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
Yep. True 100%. Awesome animation. :iconmnrthumbsupplz:
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol OMG really XD
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:iconteru-blackrabbit:
teru-blackrabbit Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Cute
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks ^^
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:iconteru-blackrabbit:
teru-blackrabbit Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
No problem
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:iconkuuma-chan:
KUUMA-CHAN Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is absolutely amazing~!! :iconyuiwahplz:
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks ^^
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:iconkuuma-chan:
KUUMA-CHAN Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're very welcome~!<3
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:iconsgt-stories:
SGT-Stories Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HOLY SH** SON THIS IS AAMMAAZZIINNGG! TEACH ME!
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol thx I wish I could but I have no clue either ~.~
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SGT-Stories Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw
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:iconyuka143:
Yuka143 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool XD and hilarious
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks
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Optorylpulpus Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol, she put the lollypop back in her mouth!!!
Amazing animation, must have taken you long, I know now, been spending so much time on that Hatsune Miku pic I'm getting really impatient and frustrated :/
Already want to start working on my own characters XD, but I made it a point that I have to finish it before I start anything else.
Great work, and liking the tuts, though I'm having to kinda improvise at times since I'm using gimp which is completely different to SAI.
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FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your patience is so strong!I rarely publish pics cuz I quit on finishing what Im working on and start new doodles :p lol...Thanks so much for the kind words!
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:iconoptorylpulpus:
Optorylpulpus Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No worries, Im experiencing the exact same thing with that Miku image :/ and also my comic, but i keep telling myself I cant quit otherwise it would be a damn shame.
Still, sometimes I just feel like dropping my comic art and any digital and just focus on my paintings, but another part of me really wants me to keep working on comic even if its once in a while.
So we're on the same page, plus your animation was really awesome. Should definitely do more of those. Will give my critique soon.
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FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol you are right!same here!^^; thx btw for the comment and "coming soon critique"I'll try if I find time to finish other animations I started >w< *im so lazy!
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dawnluv Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
wut program u use???
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SAI for the making and Image ready for the animation ^^
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:icondawnluv:
dawnluv Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
how bouts the animation?
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Drown layer on layer and added the colors on SAI,then worked on the animation timing
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:icondawnluv:
dawnluv Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
oh ok thanks!!... just wondering mouse or tablet?
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
tablet ^^
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:icondawnluv:
dawnluv Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
wow its really amazing!!!!.. i heard u used got to schurz hs is dat true?
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I didn't got that ? ^^;
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:icondawnluv:
dawnluv Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
wow this is amazing!!
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks
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:iconanimeferdria:
AnimeFerDria Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Student Artist
awesome stufff, wish i could do that
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww thanks dear :hug:
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:iconsilverlife:
silverlife Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Girl: talk to the hand
Ghost: huh?
*BLAST*
pwned! :D

good stuff :happybounce:
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:iconfionacanajart:
FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol thanks dear
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ifkittycatscoudfly Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it :iconclapplz:
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FionaCanajART Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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Kitty-the-Dinosaur Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome animation you should hav a show!!!
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